Hi guys welcome back to my blog.
This is some of my free writing.
my writing goal is punctuaion
This is my writing goal.
- Punctuation:
- Question mark
- Speech marks
I was walking down the street and asking people.
If they can adopt me and after 3 days someone babysat me.
Until my mum or dad come to get me but they call me and said.
That we are on a youki and we will no come back bye.
Then I told the prison what my mum and dad said. The person said, “this is bad no.”
“How is this bad?”.
If they can adopt me and after 3 days someone babysat me.
Until my mum or dad come to get me but they call me and said.
That we are on a youki and we will no come back bye.
Then I told the prison what my mum and dad said. The person said, “this is bad no.”
“How is this bad?”.
“Because i don’t what to be your dad”.
“Do you what me to leave?”.
“Go in your room”
“ok”.
hop you like it .
can you give me feadback of my punctuaion thank you.
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