Today I will be showing you my writing that we did it's call show vs tell. So my teacher has put 5 show sentences and we have to put them in tell sentences. Here is a question have you tryed to put tell instead of show.
Here is my work.
SHOW
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Don’t Tell
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Brian pursed his lips and clenched his fists into tight balls. Try as he might he could not contain himself. Within seconds he erupted like a volcano.
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Brian was angry. He started to yell.
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An ache started deep in his stomach. He turned away as his eyes welled up with tears.
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Johnny felt sad.
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Bayile was glad she saw here dad from. Work he was smiling so hard his jaw was hearting.
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Bailey was happy.
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Jeremy was so dismayed when she just found out here dad died
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Jeremy was shocked.
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Tama was jumping up and down and he can’t stand still because he was delighted he was
vs his old team.
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Tama was excited by the rugby match he was playing in that afternoon.
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