Hello everyone,
Today I'm going to tell you about what this poem. Is so this poem is called a haiku poem it needs 5 7 5 so. We need 5 Silesia and 7 then another 5. Have you ever done a haiku poem.
Here is my one.
Mossy green rocks sit.
Down right on uncomfortable .
On really bad stone with water.
I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Wednesday, 27 May 2020
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Hi Kayden
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your Haiku to your blog. I can tell that you were referencing the photo in the book about Tuna. I want you to have another check on your last line, we are looking for 5 syllables only.
Great work being independent on this task.
- Miss Birtch