writing show vs tell

Hello everyone,

 Today I will be showing you my writing that we did it's call  show vs tell. So my teacher has put 5 show sentences and we have to put them in tell sentences. Here is a question have you tryed to put tell instead of show.

Here is my work.

SHOW	Don’t Tell
Brian pursed his lips and clenched his fists into tight balls. Try as he might he could not contain himself. Within seconds he erupted like a volcano.	Brian was angry. He started to yell.
An ache started deep in his stomach. He turned away as his eyes welled up with tears.	Johnny felt sad.
Bayile was glad she saw here dad from.  Work he was smiling so hard his jaw was hearting.	Bailey was happy.
Jeremy was so dismayed when she just found out here dad died	Jeremy was shocked.
Tama was jumping up and down and he can’t stand still because  he was delighted he was vs his old team.	Tama was excited by the rugby match he was playing in that afternoon.

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my writeing blog post

Hello everyone,

Today I will be telling you about my  writing.  We have been   putting  the instead of I. We have a  picture that we have to write 5 senctences with starting with The instead of I. 

Here is my work.

Find five things related to the senses to describe in this image. Start each one with ‘The…’

1. The lightning has struck the water and to make  a big splash.  

2. The thunder cracked shaking the water and the sky.  

3. The clouds move faster than it usually is and the clouds are  grey 

4. The lightning cracked like a light turned on.

5. The clouds turned really dark and frightening.

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Topic Dance

hello eveyone,

Today I will be telling you about what we are doing for topic. We are picking what dance do we what to larn. We can olnly pick 5 Videos. What one out of this video do you  like.?  

Here are my five videos. 

Video 1  Break dance.

Video 2  Hip hop.

Video 3  break dance.

Video 4  hip hop.

Video 5 hip hop.

Here is my google drawing.

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