Hello everyone
Today i'm going to tell you what I did about my holdays. insted of oging to orana park I went to a park and went exploring and then I climed a hill and my Mum , Danielle,Liam and Lilly and Troy lilly and troy are my cussons they found this thing and they showed us it.
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Tuesday 15 October 2019
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Hi Kayden,
ReplyDeleteSounds like a great trip in the holidays. I would love to know where you went and which hill you climbed. What did you find? Does your mum have a phone? Maybe you could borrow t to take some photos and post on your blog next time you go exploring.
Love seeing your posting!
Miss D
G'day Kayden,
ReplyDeleteIt's your boy Tom here. It's a good blog post, but I think you need to reread your writing and change some words. I like that you got some climbing in with a lot of your family members. I also like that you said that your cousins names are Lilly and Troy. Even with little mistakes it was a good blog post. Tom
Hi kayden,
ReplyDeleteI like your blog about going to the park with cousin. But as i was reading I notice some spelling mistake. In the first and second sentence that is where I saw it.your title said Holadays I think you meant Holidays. but keep up the great work. bye